My Factory in a video

[Devildog]

Hello,
This is my factory that i worked on a few weeks back an i made a video of it to show it.
Note i did how ever loose audio so i fast forwarded the video a little bit because their was no sound due to my microphone breaking and then dying off.

Link to my old Factory : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mv2w0ekuk7k

I also recently started making Youtube videos of my game play with mods an showing what im building an ect.
I would like to have feedback on how to improve my Factory and layout.

Current Factory - This link below.
Video to Current Factory : http://youtu.be/GiSQ1iEoAIQ

[PharAway]

Like the videos bro. However, one critique. Put some commentary during the timelapse and explain a bit what we're looking at. Alot of people (myself included sometimes) listen to youtube while doing other things. So if it is purely a video with no commentary it may not get as many views. This is a difficulty I have personally sometimes with my own live commentary (being silent for extended periods) so I'm not one to gripe too much. But, thanks for sharing the vids!

[Devildog]

Thanks,
My commentaries haven't gone well in the past so i decided to just do something a little different this time with a time lapse with music that i made just for this video.
Im going back over to voice next episode, and wont be doing a time lapse.

[ColonelFailure]

My own commentary is far from good, but over the course of 20 or so videos I've noticed that in some areas I am improving. If anything I'd suggest that fluency comes from practise and self-appraisal. I'm hoping that by the time I've done a thousand of these things I'll be able to complete a sentence without losing my train of thought.

[Devildog]

My own commentary is far from good, but over the course of 20 or so videos I've noticed that in some areas I am improving. If anything I'd suggest that fluency comes from practise and self-appraisal. I'm hoping that by the time I've done a thousand of these things I'll be able to complete a sentence without losing my train of thought.

ColonelFailure , Whats you're channel name? - I guess ill eventually get better at it, i haven't even scratched the surface on doing commentary.
But Factorio is super fun doing it on compared to my other ones, and thanks.

[FishSandwich]

Nice vids. Hmm, is it just me or do we have similar voices?

[skomick]

Great vids! Keep 'em comin'!
(Lol, Fish )