[Twinsen] Bad sentence structure

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[Twinsen] Bad sentence structure

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In-game, researching the tech 'combat robotics':
"Combat robotics help to fight the enemy with their guns.
They are spawned from the capsules and have a limited lifetime. Some follow the player"

Is "their guns" referring to the enemy alien guns or the robot guns. I would recommend a change to something along the lines of the following:

"Combat robots are equipped with guns to help fight the enemy" (alt. "aliens" instead of "enemy")
"Combat robots are spawned from capsules and have a limited life time. Some robots can follow the player."
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Re: Bad sentence structure

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MegaMech wrote:Is "their guns" referring to the enemy alien guns or the robot guns.
But aliens don't have guns. :|
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Re: Bad sentence structure

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MasterBuilder wrote:But aliens don't have guns. :|
Exactly

I feel like my 3rd grade english teacher right now haha
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Re: [Twinsen] Bad sentence structure

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Changed the text for 0.12.30.
Thanks for the suggestion.
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