Factorio Trailer - Preview

[Subzerosz]

hello @ all

importent: im not here to get some subscribers

i start to make trailer and preview videos. this is my 3th video and i never used a video editing software before...
you are pros in factorio, take a look and say me what you think. you help me a lot with your criticism

thank you


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V3tnkzo ... e=youtu.be

[Subzerosz]

some views but nothing to say? what is good and what is bad? ._.

[The Phoenixian]

Hmm... Assuming you wanted to show the buildup of a factory in your trailer as opposed to the maturity of a factory that is seen in the official trailer:

Your music choice was good and fits the buildup idea quite well but I think you should see if you can show the growth of the factory itself through the action in the video more and less through text.

[Subzerosz]

okay thanks, next time i make it better

you help me a lot!

[calcifer]

Overall, it looks great, nice job! Minor points for improvement though:

* The text disappears waaay too fast sometimes, especially if it is multiline.
* Brown text over semi-transparent black background is a bit difficult to read. Maybe white would be better? Or Factorio's orange?

[-root]

Is that the music from one of the sims games?

[Subzerosz]

thanks for you help
the music is not from sims.

Music: Call to Adventure by Kevin MacLeod is licensed under CC Attribution 3.0.

Direct Link: http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-fr ... UAN1300022.