valneq wrote: Mon Nov 18, 2024 2:53 pm
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I strongly disagree with you here. None of the sentences in question mention the subject at all. The "quality" is not the subject here. The quality is not the actor. The subject in the first example would be a mining drill:
> A mining drill at higher quality will deplete resources more slowly.
In the second case, the spoilable item is the subject (i.e. what is spoiling):
> A spoilable item at higher quality will spoil more slowly.
The phrasing used in the game right now just omits the subject of the sentence altogether and thus has to use passive form.
Ah, I see. So we are going to argue the rules of Grammar, are we? Ok. I will follow this argument and the rules provided...
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You are welcome to disagree; and you are correct in that neither the sentence: "Resources are depleted more slowly at higher qualities." and the sentence "Spoils more slowly at higher qualities." contain the subject... Except, even if you argue that "a mining drill" is the subject of the first sentence and "a spoilable item" is the subject of the second sentence, you are incorrect based on the "Rules of English Grammar" as stated.
As per the Cambridge Dictionary's website's article on "Dummy subjects" (
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/gra ... y-subjects): "English clauses which are not imperatives must have a subject." (NOTE: I will not copy/paste the entire article here, anyone who cares to verify what I say can go to the provided link - or do their own search.)
The example it gives can be shortened to: "It's interesting to argue." with "It's" being what is called a "Dummy Subject" and the "Real Subject" being "argue."
So, to rewrite the sentence so that the subject is at the beginning of the sentence: "Arguing is interesting."
Babble, though more "wordy" agrees with this concept in its explanation of English sentence order.
The Grammarly website says it better. Under the 'header' "What is the subject of a sentence?", the first sentence of the second paragraph
literally reads: "Every complete sentence has a subject." and continues: "Without a subject, you don’t have a sentence—you have a phrase."
Busuu (a website) lists 12 "rules of grammar" and number 4 is: "Use complete sentences." which it explains as: "A full sentence has a subject (who or what the sentence is about) and a verb (what the subject is doing)."
English Club (another website) lists 20 rules, and number 3 agrees with the above sentiment.
So does English College (yet another website), but with 11 rules and Rule 1: "Use Active Voice" specifies: "Active sentences have this formula: S (subject) + V (verb) + O (object):"
-== I could go on, but if the above doesn't make my point no amount of references will.
The point the above makes is as follows: "every 'proper' sentence contains a subject."
So...
Let us analyze the referenced sentences under this rule:
Sentence 1 (under the Factoriopedia for any "Mining Drill" and the "Pumpjack"): "Resources are depleted more slowly at higher qualities."
If we go based on the assumption that a "simple" sentence "consists of just one independent clause" which is "a group of words that contains at least one subject and at least one verb and can stand alone as a complete sentence" and has "no dependent clauses" (based on Grammarly's "Simple Sentence: Meaning and Examples" article), or that a sentence "at it's most basic" consists of: "A subject" and "A Predicate." (again, Grammarly: "Understanding the Subject of a Sentence: A Comprehensive Guide") then:
Subject: "Resources"; Predicate: "are depleted more slowly at higher qualities."
A "Predicate" is: "A predicate is the grammatical term for the words in a sentence or clause that describe the action but not the subject." (Grammarly: What Is a Predicate, and How Does It Work?") and can be explained as: "The predicate must contain a verb, and the verb requires or permits other elements to complete the predicate, or else precludes them from doing so. These elements are objects (direct, indirect, prepositional), predicatives, and adjuncts[...]" (Wikipedia on Predicate (Grammar), section: "Syntax"/"Traditional Grammar").
So, the Predicate: "are depleted more slowly at higher qualities." would be broken into: "are": Verb - specifically a "linking verb" (gallaudet.edu), "depleted": adjective, "more slowly": adverb, "at": preposition, "higher qualities": adjective. (all not specifically marked were gotten by entering "What type of word is:" into Google followed by the word or word pair.)
So...
What you are probably thinking of is the difference between the sentence (structure) "subject" and the (linguistics) "topic" or "theme" of the sentence. Wikipedia's article: "Topic and comment" defines this quite well within its first two paragraphs: (first paragraph, sentence one) "In linguistics, the topic, or theme, of a sentence is what is being talked about[...]" and (second paragraph) "The topic of a sentence is distinct from the grammatical subject. The topic is defined by pragmatic considerations, that is, the context that provides meaning. The grammatical subject is defined by syntax. In any given sentence the topic and grammatical subject may be the same, but they need not be. [...]"
What you declare as the "subject" of the sentence is, in fact, the "topic". The 'syntactical' "subject" of the sentence
exists within the sentence, as all "complete sentences"
must have one, and the sentence in question
is a "complete sentence".
So, no, "[...] a mining drill[...]" is, as defined by English grammar's rules, definitively
NOT the subject of the sentence in question, and (the word) "Resources[...]" is.
Further, you attempt to argue that: "The quality is not the actor." Again, I disagree. This sentence is a great example of "Passive Voice" where: "passive voice changes the position of the actor by using the verb to be along with a past participle. Past participles are past tense verb forms that are used as adjectives." (Montana State University's page on "Active and Passive Voice").
The key point to take away from the explanation is: "[...] by using the verb 'to be' along with a 'past participle'.[...]" and the explanation of "Past participles are past tense verb forms that are used as adjectives."
"Are" is the "present tense" form of the verb "to be." (Confirmed via Grammarly: "The Verb “To Be” Explained, With Examples") "Depleted" is the past tense of the verb "deplete" and is used as an adjective in this sentence.
Therefore... The sentence
is irrifutably an example of "Passive Voice."
To change it into "Active Voice" the position of the "actor" has to be changed. The only word in the sentence that is (or 'can be') a noun other than "Resources" is the word from the adjective in the phrase "higher qualities"; in other words: "quality."
Quality: (Oxford Dictionary) Noun: Definition 1: "the standard of something as measured against other things of a similar kind; the degree of excellence of something." That definition seems to match Factorio's usage of "Quality" perfectly, does it not?
Therefore, according to the "Rules of Grammar", to make the sentence: "Resources are depleted more slowly at higher qualities." It must become: "Higher quality depletes resources more slowly."
This only changes a few things: "Qualities" becomes "Quality" and goes from part of an Adjective Phrase to being a noun that the "comparative adjective" "higher" modifies. "Depleted" becomes "depletes" going from being a past tense verb - or, in this case, an adjective - to the present tense verb and sentence's main verb. "Are" is removed (removing the "to be" passive voice). And, finally, the position of the sentence's "Actor" or "Subject" and it's "Object" are switched.
Finally, I'm not saying that the sentences you "constructed" for your response are 'incorrect', per se. What I am saying is that by literally
reconstructing the sentence away from what it is within the game you are invalidating your own argument.
You cannot take a definitive, distinct, absolute example and change it to fit your argument's needs as an example of why your argument is correct. Under any circumstances where arguments are being "graded" in any way (debate, scholarly, Logic, etc) your argument would be ripped to shreds and thrown out.
The original sentence (written directly from the in-game Factoriopedia page on "Electric Mining Drills" with the window open so I can write it character for character) says: "Resources are depleted more slowly at higher qualities."
It absolutely
does not say: "A mining drill at higher quality will deplete resources more slowly" ... or any variation thereof.
No. This absolutely doesn't mean the sentence as written in-game cannot be
read or
understood as the sentence you constructed. It merely means that "what it says" and "what you
assert it says" are two
very different things. And... if you want to argue with the "Rules of Grammar" as the basis, your argument is incorrect.
It isn't "The phrasing used in the game right now just omits the subject of the sentence altogether and thus has to use passive form." That's not how grammar works. True, sentences "in English"
can and
sometimes do omit the "topic" or "theme" of a discussion/sentence. But that isn't what
my argument is based on, and if you are replying to
my argument, then it
also isn't what your argument is based on.
My
exact wording is:
Aricitic wrote: Sat Nov 16, 2024 6:46 am
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Also, I think the problem we are running into here is that in the referenced sentences the "subject" of the sentence is neither the machine/item in question nor the process that "thing" is undergoing (resource depletion or spoilage) but the quality of the machine/item in question.[...]
I've effectively proven this by laying out the rules of (English) grammar above. Your argument against me doesn't follow the rules (as defined), makes unfounded assertions that disregard the rules (as defined), and adds context that doesn't exist within the related sentences.
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Finally, finally...
If you believe that I am wrong, with regards to Grammar as defined for the English language, please, feel free to '
prove it.'
Cite your sources (I tried to. I'm painfully aware of a potential "character limit" otherwise I would have provided direct links to ALL sources.) And don't change the definitive, distinct, absolute examples provided to us by the Factorio team to suit your needs.