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I started a thread over in Maps and Scenarios, but I added some story and took some shots of my base. That kind of makes it a combo thread with Show your Creations. Hence this cross post. (also this is a more traveled forum and I am going for visibility)
Go take a look:
https://forums.factorio.com/forum/vie ... =36&t=6147
I am looking for feedback, especially on my writing style.

The first victim has arrived!
Dutts left a beautiful post with his initial reactions.
https://forums.factorio.com/forum/vie ... 035#p48035

I have a feeling this will be amusing.

Sorry, but it doesn't make sense to link threads in two boards like so. That is just distracting.
I made a shadow topic out of it. https://wiki.phpbb.com/Shadow_topic
This is closed.