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Hello,
This is my factory that i worked on a few weeks back an i made a video of it to show it.
Note i did how ever loose audio so i fast forwarded the video a little bit because their was no sound due to my microphone breaking and then dying off.

Link to my old Factory : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mv2w0ekuk7k

I also recently started making Youtube videos of my game play with mods an showing what im building an ect.
I would like to have feedback on how to improve my Factory and layout.

Current Factory - This link below.
Video to Current Factory : http://youtu.be/GiSQ1iEoAIQ

Like the videos bro. However, one critique. Put some commentary during the timelapse and explain a bit what we're looking at. Alot of people (myself included sometimes) listen to youtube while doing other things. So if it is purely a video with no commentary it may not get as many views. This is a difficulty I have personally sometimes with my own live commentary (being silent for extended periods) so I'm not one to gripe too much. But, thanks for sharing the vids!

Thanks,
My commentaries haven't gone well in the past so i decided to just do something a little different this time with a time lapse with music that i made just for this video.
Im going back over to voice next episode, and wont be doing a time lapse.

My own commentary is far from good, but over the course of 20 or so videos I've noticed that in some areas I am improving. If anything I'd suggest that fluency comes from practise and self-appraisal. I'm hoping that by the time I've done a thousand of these things I'll be able to complete a sentence without losing my train of thought.

ColonelFailure wrote:My own commentary is far from good, but over the course of 20 or so videos I've noticed that in some areas I am improving. If anything I'd suggest that fluency comes from practise and self-appraisal. I'm hoping that by the time I've done a thousand of these things I'll be able to complete a sentence without losing my train of thought.

ColonelFailure , Whats you're channel name? - I guess ill eventually get better at it, i haven't even scratched the surface on doing commentary.
But Factorio is super fun doing it on compared to my other ones, and thanks.

Nice vids. Hmm, is it just me or do we have similar voices?

Great vids! Keep 'em comin'!
(Lol, Fish )