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hello @ all

importent: im not here to get some subscribers

i start to make trailer and preview videos. this is my 3th video and i never used a video editing software before...
you are pros in factorio, take a look and say me what you think. you help me a lot with your criticism

thank you


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V3tnkzo ... e=youtu.be

some views but nothing to say? what is good and what is bad? ._.

Hmm... Assuming you wanted to show the buildup of a factory in your trailer as opposed to the maturity of a factory that is seen in the official trailer:

Your music choice was good and fits the buildup idea quite well but I think you should see if you can show the growth of the factory itself through the action in the video more and less through text.

okay thanks, next time i make it better

you help me a lot!

Overall, it looks great, nice job! Minor points for improvement though:

* The text disappears waaay too fast sometimes, especially if it is multiline.
* Brown text over semi-transparent black background is a bit difficult to read. Maybe white would be better? Or Factorio's orange?

Is that the music from one of the sims games?

thanks for you help
the music is not from sims.

Music: Call to Adventure by Kevin MacLeod is licensed under CC Attribution 3.0.

Direct Link: http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-fr ... UAN1300022.